I found another good book to read to help learn how to write better. It's "How to Write Science Fiction and Fantasy" by Orson Scott Card. I started reading it at the bookstore yesterday. I downloaded it today and will finish reading it on my Kindle. I must also admit that the writer's itch had to be scratched so I opened up Phobia and started making changes. I found a lot of things that needed editing. Luckily, I had written only 10 pages so far.
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