The second pass through is complete. Minimal changes were made. Now it goes to Cheryl (my wife) for her expert grammatical review. I've sent a copy to my sister who will most likely be doing a book cover for me. I also have a guy at work who does air brushing and he has offered to do a free cover as well. I will choose the best.
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