Second edit complete

The second pass through is complete.  Minimal changes were made.  Now it goes to Cheryl (my wife) for her expert grammatical review.  I've sent a copy to my sister who will most likely be doing a book cover for me.  I also have a guy at work who does air brushing and he has offered to do a free cover as well.  I will choose the best.

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